Saturday, August 15, 2009
The Meeting
Chapter XXXII. Dark Cloud turned. The girl with the blonde hair. Was. There. Just there. Dark Cloud froze and stared at her. Renna noticed.
Friday, August 14, 2009
The End Approaches
Chapter XXXI Darla was beginning to get very nervous. Marta said the end was approaching. What would happen? Marta wouldn't say.
Thursday, August 13, 2009
To Care or Not to Care
Chapter XXX If Renna had a fault it was that she didn't care enough. She wanted to care, but didn't want to enough to change her life.
Water
Chapter XXVIX Raul saw Dark Cloud in the bar. Dark Cloud's eyes glistened like a blank pool of water. Raul had never seen a blank pool.
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Raul
Chapter XXVIII Raul dreamt of leaving the city. Not to LA. Somewhere quieter, peaceful, cooler. But he couldn't leave Renna. She needed him.
Too much telling?
Chapter XXVI Anemone went faint with disgust thinking of acts Renna might have performed. Renna didn't belong with good people.
and that's more than enough about anemone for awhile.
Chapter XXVII. Renna didn't perform any of those acts. Not her thing. She wasn't disgusted though, faint or otherwise.
and that's more than enough about anemone for awhile.
Chapter XXVII. Renna didn't perform any of those acts. Not her thing. She wasn't disgusted though, faint or otherwise.
Monday, August 10, 2009
The most current chapter is always first.
Chapter XXV. Anemone entered the coffee shop cautiously. Marta waited. "I don't like it", Anemone said,"too random, chancy." Marta smiled.
Backstory: Anemone hated leaving anything to chance. She wanted everything under control and watched constantly for others' sabotage.
Backstory: Anemone hated leaving anything to chance. She wanted everything under control and watched constantly for others' sabotage.
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